All Comments on 'The Ultimate Sacrifice Pt. 03'

Most unusual story I've ever read. Your attention to detail is great. I hope hector has more struggles coming up. Waking up as hector and knowing everything was like reading a clive cussler novel.

Welcome back and great chapter! This story has a great premise. If you wanted to be really involves with the characters, you could create a different outcome to Bob/Hector's transfer....just an idea.

Good job and please keep it up!

Sc8

Nice story, but skips important parts at times.

Not sure how he suddenly knew what he could do with souls, and about the enemy. You forgot to show him learning this.

I just read all three parts back to back. Amazing .... A bit of back story on how he figured out 1 how to search a soul, and 2 who the spy is. would be appreciated. That said. It is your story and I will appreciate any new chapters regardless if you expand for us old folks or not. 5 stars for all three chapters. Thank you for taking the time to share

very interesting........................good so far

This is good. Love it. AAAAAA++++++

Glad that Bob, or now Hector, still has his "smart ass sense of humor".