All Comments on 'The Unbound Genie Ch. 01'

keep it going

Most teenagers definitely would let sexuality distract them and I appreciate that your protagonist has that air of reality, though I doubt even a teen leaves a woman with a G cup size without knowing that is what she wants.

I can see potential here, but I hope your other chapters are a bit longer. I look forward to giving the next chapter a look.

I’m really eager to read more. It’s very refreshing to see something well written. My only desire is for a long story and bigger assets, but they’re already big enough for me to be happy so keep up the good work!

Good first submission!!!

Just found the story. Doesn't matter that it has a genie; the story is mind control or nonconsentual.

Interesting start...

12 1/2 inches????? Get real! Bye