All Comments on 'The Underclassman Ch. 10'

Love this story!

Oh gracious, you managed to get ‘elongation, shaft, cock, dick, pole and rod’ into just one paragraph!

It was a good read but would prefer if you stuck with one noun for the man's cock. Each word has a place and could give more meaning to act itself. Cock for run of the mill, shaft for something hard and fast, rod for desensitized/lack of emotional connection, penis for first time, and/or just using he/him for something more personal.

A beautifully written chapter in this terrific series. The array of characters is amazing, and the story truly compelling, as this encounter with Hannah demonstrates. Five stars.