All Comments on 'The Undertow Ch. 02'

So really it is all about the money not the relationship 1*

Lesbian writer pens a story with a total wimp compliant man, quelle surprise...

This is great. You have sense of humour and write nicely too! I hope you keep the story coming, as it were.

Excellent writing. Nice.

I'm sorry, but this is just sick mysandry. What's sad is that so many dudes love this shit. People whack to this? Before everyone bitches that I'm a whiny anon. Please save it. I can get into femdom, but this lacks any marital affection and warmth. He needs to get away from her pronto. But he wont. He's not really a full person, just a doormat

So, it's about the money.