All Comments on 'The unexpected housekeeper'

Great story! Would love a second part.

Please continue. Hopefully she gets breast implants and fucks him all the time.

Well written, and a great surprise! Great to have a housekeeper, especially as talented as Mali.

Please write on. They are so cute and I personally wanna see how they evolve

More please.

I would love a house cleaner like her only thing that would make it hotter is that little sweet ladyboy was a dominating top

I had such an amazing experience reading this story I didn’t want it to end . Please continue the story I loved it

I'd love to read more of this

Lovingly thought out, written with heart, and presented with passion, Keep going.

We know he is into anal. Give it to him.

Loved it, and we all know what will happen eventually. obviously they would get married and who knows maybe the assistant would enjoy a couple big fat bonuses in addition to the money.

One or both of them need to get fucked!

The Unexpected Housekeeper was a great little story. Hot sex and romance is a welcome change to this category.

I like it. It looks like you left room for the assistant to come in to the picture. She sounds like a little minx who has to be part of the fun! Well done.

I read it till the end word by word. Quite amazing author with fluent language. I believe he is a professional writer. All that I missed was while taking shower I thought Mali would give him a blow job. It did not come as they were soaking together. Hope to see more stories to come. Good luck.

Great story, I'd love to read more.

I hope you continue this story. And don't wait 2 years please

He needs to get fucked and be asissy maid which Sarah´s plan

I hope assistant is really packing too ;)

Great plot/story line, you leave it open for so many possible turns.

There is only one Bad Thing about this story.

It is to short i want to read more, pleased.

Thank you

Great story, you definitely left me wanting more.

I loved the story. The way you performed the character building and developed a love story is of the utmost. I loved the story and hope that you continue with further development. I'm a sucker for love stories. Keep up the great work and I look forward to reading more of your stuff. Again great job and keep up the good work.

Very nice, well written and constructed

Great work. Good story progression and great content

You mixed your past and present tenses up, used the wrong words (e.g. 'sensible' when you meant sensitive), and then - in the typical way of your size-obsessed people - awarded the small, slim tranny with a ridiculous nine-inch cock. As I said: poor.

Hope this will become a series

I don't usually read TV stories but the title of this one seemed interesting. Once I started reading it, I could not stop. Looking to more chapters. I only have one question, your secretary gets a massage from a ladyboy, so is her massage as good as yours?

i really love this story. I wish i could find a housekeeper like Meli

One of the few that needs a 6th star. Well done!!

Just lovely. Beautiful story, very visual and relatable.

xoxo,

Di

now chapter 2

Thank you, your story of Mike and Mali was just so natural and beautiful I couldn't stop reading it. I guess I am taken by romance and true feeling. You actually brought a tear to my eyes I felt it so deeply. Please continue their story, TG Tiffany

Clearly one of my favorite stories, and subjects ever! #1 on my bucket list is a relationship like this.

I'm always a little wary in "servant" stories for a hint of abuse or coercion [sorry, not my thing] but you've handled this really nicely. great writing, would be happy with a few more chapters.

I love the tenderness of MIke and Mali. You wrote feelings and caring into the characters. beautiful beginning. There are lots of opportunities for the storyas their relationship develops.

Loved It

please continue the story

Wow, i love the Thai Ladyboy stories, having been there many times the more innocent types like Mali would be my choice any day. A perfect companion.

Wow yes, a truly beautiful story. Mali is an gem, I love the gentle way her beauty and innocence is capturing "your" heart. She is capturing mine as well.

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