All Comments on 'The Unlikely Quarterback Ch. 03'

If the person has a pulse. This was a big gaffe. Never hug a person's waste.

I'll edit the waste part out and correct the CPR scene. You're correct, he shouldn't have been doing chest compression if he felt a pulse. I did state it was erratic and she wasn't breathing so in that case he should have only performed assisted breathing. Note, I did do some research on this before hand, but I missed that. Thanks.

BTW, I'm a fan of your work. I hope you're still writing.

You might want to clarify that when you say "no sex until later" you mean later chapters not later in THIS chapter. It would save a lot of confusion.

This is a good story. I hope you continue. I think hardaysnight needs to go back to writing. And continue the gwen and steve saga.

Looking forward to your next chapter!

Didn't know that did ya!

Some stories grab my attention and make me glad I started late reading them. I get to read many chapters in a short time making the story doubly good.

What makes a good story? The author.