All Comments on 'The Unlikely Quarterback Ch. 08'

by MaximusTheMad

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Tyson001Tyson001over 4 years ago
Best story

WOW WHAT A STORY MAN CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER

BEST STORY EVER

SirColin77SirColin77over 4 years ago
Nice work

I’ve enjoyed your story so far.

I would like to put in my vote for Team Candy. 😂

cybojicybojiover 4 years ago
Hes being set up

The sharing rabbit hole is the best way to lose everyone. I really am enjoying the story. 5

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Go with Candy. Too many rules...'She only wants rules so she can break them' I do not trust her.

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I am writing a part two to April Fool, so I have submitted an edited version of the first part fixing some bad dialogue and grammar. The story is that same only with phasing differences and corrections to things that didn't make sense originally. I did finally come up with a ...