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All Comments on 'The unpleasant trip to Gynecologist'

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GoddessViolet86GoddessViolet86about 1 year ago

Please ask someone to help you edit your stories. This one was a bit convoluted and really rushed. But keep trying. đź‘Ť

JustMyStoriesJustMyStoriesabout 1 year agoAuthor

Sorry if it seems convoluted. English is not my first launguage. Thanks for the support

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

From bad to worse to worse, even for a Non-consent/Reluctance story. I couldn't even finish it. Just wow.

merrySMmerrySM9 months ago

This has to be the worst story on Literotica.

It could have been a great story! Too much, too quick, too silly too jumbled. No flow etc.

If you had used an editor, this could have been a very hot exciting story.

Plus you totally lost me with the aunt's partition.

Hope you get an editor to help you.

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I live in europe, but english is not my first launguage. My stories are written in my first launguage and then translated to english. Sorry if my writting seems wierd.