All Comments on 'The Unraveling'

I have to say that I think this is the most descriptive piece of writing I have seen on this site. No overt sexual activity until the end but the story drew us along its path with ease. An interesting topic to read about and how it alludes to further chapters. Congratulations.

Excellent story my friend. Well paced. Kinda believable. And lovely build up. Look forward to more.

Great story! Obviously a lot of time and care taken here - imaginative and evocatively written. Bit worried about that last line though!! Hopefully it's not going to get too rough... either way, looking forward to more from you!

The articulate intimacy of the story is nothing short of beautiful with sensual subtlety. You opened a window into such an intimate, vulnerable core of being. Thank you for sharing this! I hope you continue on your path of exploration for all of us to share. I, for one, feel enriched by it.

what a wonderful story, well written, kept me reeled in, wanting more. you truly are an erotica writer and i hope you continue to post here...thank you, trish

This was wonderful. Perfect CFNM story.

This was a very impressive first story! Interesting characters, nice use of a much loved CFNM trope, very sexy, and so descriptive I felt like I was there. I do hope you continue this one soon. Thanks for taking the time to turn us on!