All Comments on 'The Unwilling Neighbour Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Keep it going

And don't you dare not open up that hot, tight virgin butt hole. She needs to learn that she is a 3 hole cum dump.

dokonodokonoabout 3 years ago

very good, hope there will be more

LenardSpencerLenardSpencerabout 3 years ago
Interesting story

Just a quick point: You stated she took her first legal alcoholic drink at 19. However, 18 is the legal drinking age in all states of Australia. (Devil in the details) Cheers. Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Good start

Building up nicely. The mum sounds hot as well.....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Excellent!!!!!

Awesome start!!!!

Livewirecanuck88Livewirecanuck88about 3 years ago
Great first chapter!

First off, thank you for taking the leap and submitting your story! This was such a hot and great first chapter. Can't wait to see where and how for that matter Anna gets taken next. Keep up the amazing work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Well done - need more soon !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
keep it coming!

enjoying it so far and wondering where you are going to go!

thanks for sharing!

TommyCrazyGuNTommyCrazyGuNabout 3 years ago

Excited for the next chapter this story so far is amazing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Really awesome story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

One of the best stories I have read on here. I wish the stories I pay for were half as good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

So wrong! I love it!

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I've wanted to write some erotic short stories for a while, but never actually gotten around to putting my ideas to the keyboard. Have finally started - what better way to spend a train ride to work each day? I do try to keep writing as much as I can, but unfortunately it is ...

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