All Comments on 'The Vacation, Ch. 02'

Great story and plot lines. Keep up the good work.

5 Stars! Love it! Love it! Love it!

""Your welcome" I said with a smile. "

That, in FULL, would be ""You ARE welcome" I said with a smile." - that comes down to ""You're welcome" I said with a smile."!

I love the detail information about the whole story. The story got my memories of some of my single day of 14 years before getting married to my present wife. Thank you.

I never cease to be amazed at the anonymous grammar police who feel the need to correct minor infractions. These people should go talk to their cats if they need to communicate.

Interesting. Our hero went you save his lover doughter and almost got drowned himshelf. So many people died like that.

But grammar is important and the error pointed by that another anonymous its not so little as sirwoodcutter say. I wonder if it hapend because it's phonetic.

VERY sweet.

The shy, hung, stud and almost-lifeguard risked his life to save Stephanie’s daughter. He got his reward; among other things Stephanie played with his body with her big boobs and hard nipples. I know this is a romance, but the sex and the constant reminder Stephanie’s gorgeous big tits is a special treat.