All Comments on 'The Vacation Pt. 04'

Barbara doesn't care that Shirley didn't want to do something? Breaks the dom creado on limits and mutual respect, doesn't it? And can he breathe or not in the harness? Make up your mind. Going full steam ahead with a humiliation kink to the point of obliterating just about everything else is where most femdom goes off the rails. There was talk of love and care before. Don't loose sight of Shirley showing that and if necessary, protecting him from other women, especially Barbara's zealousness. If that gets lost while wallowing in the fun and games, it becomes a cliched and lesser story.

I think what happened was Dean dropped them at the Mall and went home instead of looking for a parking place. He packed everything he wanted, drove to the Bus Station and they never saw or heard from him again. After all he did have some pride and self respect. End to a really stupid story.

A beautiful series, please continue. I wait the chapter 5

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