All Comments on 'The Valentine Package'

Very well written, with love and respect and a very sensual story. Thanks and compliments from a rainy Holland.

Albert

verrrry good!

This story was very well written, very sensual and erotic. The sexual awakening of the shy housewife was very well done. One of the better I have read in awhile. I hope to see many more stories by this writer in the future.

Being an avid writer and editor, I rarely have the time to trapse about the stories. But I have tonight, and am very impressed. The beginning captured my interest and I kept reading. A genuinely erotic tale you have told; well done.

The editor in me spied some minor glitches that did not detract too much from the flow. I would recommend keeping commas to a minimum (overused here) and avoid "...too. Too..." which can be distracting to readers.

Be proud, great story. When I read yours I realize why I'm still a struggling author.

I really enjoyed your story. The innocense of the woman, the shyness, uneasiness, and then the realization that she is more than just a lady in an old nightgown was very well done. Got me all warm and tingly. *grins* ~ Red

Very good read. Good luck with the contest!