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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Nicely-written, and a good intro to the main characters; while building up our anticipation for finding out more.

Looking forward to the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great first chapter

Enjoyed this especially your appropriate use of complex vocabulary, too often writers use a thesaurus imperfectly.

djb

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Yay.

Thanks for writing this. "Lesbian vampire" is my favorite type of erotic fiction, if it's not too long and doesn't have too many characters.

I hope you finish the story soon. How many chapters are you going to have?

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Hi! I'm Kallie, a writer of erotic stories - mostly mind control and hypnosis-themed erotica, but I have written other stuff in the past and may do again. The main platform for my writing is my Patreon page, and by throwing me a few dollars a month on there you can ensure I ke...

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