All Comments on 'The Vampire's Dancer Ch. 04'

i want to read more please

But it's just standered, so far...

--- It's a Vamp meets girl, falls in love, there's a jellios Ex-something, scares girl with fangy thing but she can't leave him, theres trouble with the higher-ups but everything ends with a happaly ever after story. But maybe I'm wrong; suprize me.

--- Oh! and can you try to make the chapters longer?

Thank you for your constructive critisism, I will aim to improve in all the areas you pointed out =) thanks again ;)

Your doing a great job here "TheRavenRose", keep up the good work. Cant wait for an update. Every story needs love, romance and a bad guy/girl!

So good!!! Hurry with the next chapter please!!!!

Make another one!! Please!

So cant wait for the next chapter please hurry I must know what happens between them. ^_^

More more........very good

I really love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter xD

More plz I wanna see what happens next.

First the story. Amiddle aged female married for decades becomes so lust driven that she allows one young guy after another to pass her on to a friend. I guess that is believable

Now from the preposterous to the pretentious. I have checked out the lord's profile-other than some unexplainable name he remains anonymous. Am always confused why he belittles all anons just because they have not set up a profile.

The quality of one's comment has nothing to do with the existence of a profile. Harry, vastie, and the lord are far from literary critics