All Comments on 'The Vassal Academy Ch. 24'

Another great chapter in this story! So glad to see them coming again, keep up the great work!

Wow. I've just spent the better part of two days reading every word in the series so far and wish there was more. After years of poking around the site, its so far beyond what I expected, I'm stunned. Please keep writing!

I've just read as much of the Academy as is available at the moment and am significantly impressed. Good job! Good character development, good plot, enough detail to keep the temperature up, and a cliff-hanger at each chapter end. There were a few typos - but they certainly din't diminish my enjoyment.

Never disappointed when I read your stories. Leave me shivering and turned on. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Highly enjoyable and gets hotter.

when you used the term "wondered into" when it should obviously have been "wandered into".

CHAPTERS 22 AND 25 ARE MISSING, THIS IS NOT MY FIRST TIME READING THE STORY BUT IT WAS VERY LONG AGO SO WAS VERY DISAPPOINTED. HOPED THEY CAN BE PUT BACK UP THANKS