All Comments on 'The Veronica Story Pt. 01'

This was a very well-written story, with excellent descriptions of places, people, thoughts and emotions. Anyone who lives in the Southwest, like we do, can connect with your descriptions.

This was a very solid introduction, which, while leisurely and relaxed, does create some creative tension as the reader imagines where this might go.

Let´s hope Veronica´s husband is on board for whatever happens next. If not, our hero in the pickup truck might find himself in a tough spot, when the jealous husband finds out!

We can´t wait for the next chapter!

It is a bit short to be as good as it might be. It's also a bit disconcerting. Does he really have a wife? Does she have a husband? Him looking for her underwear in the bathroom seems odd, at least to me. I don't think most married guys would even think about something like that.

pure shit.

This definitely won't end well for his wife.