All Comments on 'The View From the 23rd Floor Pt. 03'

I was so excited to see the next installment…and it was well worth the wait. Another superb bit of fantasy!

Absolutely loving this story. Please carry on writing.

great story hope you include more piercings tattoo plus some permanent jewellery ie anklet earrings

As mentioned previously the blackmail by Audrie really deserves some form of retribution maybe by a unknown 3rd party and Daniel could help her whilst at the same time gaining knowledge of Audrie putting them on a more equal footing, I am waiting to see where this goes and trying hard to reserve judgement, but at the moment the blackmail should have had her accidentally take a fall from the 23rd floor.

Wonderful story, please continue.

I truly appreciate your comments. I considered the blackmail aspect just a method for Audrie to get her foot in the door, so to speak. I hope you can see that it is hardly ever mentioned, the deeper they get into their relationship. I don't picture Audrie as being that mean...

In any case, there are several more chapters to come. Enjoy

Good read from the beginning, I like the FLR...hope you keep the story line monogamous but more intense.