All Comments on 'The View From the 23rd Floor Pt. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Love the story - your writing is very good making it easy to read. Look forward to the next part - still very jealous of Danni as I got an extremely negative reaction and my relationship, if you can it that, never recovered.

JulesornotJulesornotabout 2 years ago

I am absolutely loving everything about this story. The tension between Dani’s desire to be femme and anxiety about inadvertently outed. So true!

Awesomely well written an creative story.

Thank you

Jules

CountDiego4CountDiego4about 2 years ago

Love this story. Danni beginning to find her circle becoming larger and larger and scarier at the same time. Would love to be in Daniels' position right now. Petrified and still excited. Please, please continue as I look every day for a new chapter of Danni/ Daniels' story.

mrwidehorizonsmrwidehorizonsabout 2 years ago

This just keeps getting wilder, I love it!

darthnader19darthnader19about 2 years ago

Damn every chapter ends leaving you wanting more. Can't get enough, always fun when there is some drama in a story can't wait to see if/how the love triangle between them develops

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Incredible. I love, love, LOVE this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I am so enthralled with this whole story! Madie needs to get with them both

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This is a fantastic story. Please keep them coming. 👍

ChangeYourPasswordChangeYourPasswordabout 2 years agoAuthor
Thanks

I'm pleased you like this tale. I have several more chapters written or planned. I hope you continue to enjoy...

Veronica_E_DayVeronica_E_Dayabout 2 years ago

This is a wonderful story and very well written. Your writing paints such a vivid mental picture with your use of details that mesh everything together.

Veronica

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I write these stories because I enjoy the writing, and because they sexually excite me. When I publish them, and you read them, I hope they entertain and excite you, too.