All Comments on 'The Virgin Ceremonies Ch. 04'

what a cliffhanger. Please write more. cos i really love your works!!

Waiting with baited breath for the next chapter.

Thanks, Anon and Shaeobrien! I hope you stick around and read the rest of the chapters :)

Too short by far!!! You're killing me, Smalls!!!! 5/5, you jerk! 😆 🤣 😂

ScottishTexan: Heroes get remembered, legends never die ;)

I guessed right! He grew up in a hurry!

Wow. IF only that Olivia had half a heart and knew how extreme the situation is that he has to tolerate by caring for his grandmother. That could prove an interesting thing to use (if you planned for it already)--especially since the Duclark grandmother is SO diametrically opposite to the younger clan members. Of course, all this violates his NDA with Olivia, so he could get royally fried (which then could make Ginny come in to save the day).

You've set this up well to go many divergent and interesting ways. 5

Loved it! Even gave the cabbie a Latino accent, in my head, as I read their exchange, but as they say, no guts, no glory! Thinking and acting by the seat of his pants can get him into big trouble with the NDA, but only IF his indiscretion is discovered. Great story. 5⭐