All Comments on 'The Virgin Ceremonies Ch. 06'

Can Not wait for the next part !

Well this was just mean… this whole series is an intense edge. I love the build up though!

Kinda mailed this one in, didn’t you?

Hi, Zoom. Nailed it and mailed it!

Thanks Anon! Just trying to keep you all on the edge of your seat!

Thanks, Aischbach! Coming soon! Chapter title next week: Brent: Starstruck Lover =O

Writing amazing as always but would love to see longer chapters / more frequent postings!

Ruh roh Shaggy!!!! 😆 🤣 😂 scored 5/5 again in spite of the short installments. Cliffhangers are expected, but doing it with such short chapters sucks eggs. Personally, I think that you're skilled enough that you could write longer chapters with greater details and still throw in the Cliffhanger.

I'm thinking that maybe it's been too long since she received the postcard and Brent is going to possibly be pissed off when she shows up in his shop. 🤔 I'm looking forward to RAFO (read and find out)

Hi ScottishTexan and Anon and all other readers, I designed the chapters to switch back and forth on POV, so the length was a bit out of my control, and of course, I want to leave you craving more!

MAJOR cringe with Sergio. How the hell though do you keep managing to have her forget that postcard? Now she's heading to Starstruck's...if only Olivia hadn't lied about that place, she wouldn't have gotten curious and be heading to try it herself. At least you're leaving something to serendipity and not trying to tease us more with it (haha). 5, despite the engineered frustration. (And it's obvious Tom is NOT into her AT ALL because she initiates but he rarely responds and tries to ignore her.)

Comentarista, haha, okay I admit, I did set out to frustrate the reader with this "scream at the screen" postcard. It's a pretty classic trope to have the answer to a problem in frame, and the character just misses every opportunity to see it. If this annoyed you, I take full responsibility 🤣

Nice set up for the possible meeting. Bit of a cliffhanger, maybe? Frustration from her not reading the postcard, but that's probably intentional on your part. Great story. I'll keep reading, enjoying this! 5⭐

So smartly written with dialog that resonates. 5/5*