All Comments on 'The Virgin Ceremonies Ch. 13'

The suspension keeps building! If Brent had a lick of sense he would try to avoid Olivia completely and not go to the party. However I appreciate for the purposes of the story he's gonna feel forced to go though, but it's gonna break his heart to see Ginny upset. 😓😭 Great as always Vanilla!

Heartless and cruel, Olivia is! So unfair. I’m on Brent’s side, Ginny seems pretty heartless, too. Are all the super rich oblivious to the feelings of the peasants that serve them? Thank you for sharing your talents with us,

Hey, nthusiastic, Olivia is for sure a real bitch. Ginny though, i had to defend her a little! We have to remember the family she grew up in. She's a product of her environment, and she is very much stuck between a rock and a hard place. It's a very frustrating scenario, but i do agree, Brent is the most likeable character. Ginny has some growing up to do.

Hi, Jhlieberman. For sure, he has to go! And if Ginny had GIVEN HIM HER DAMN NUMBER we could have avoided this with a single phone call. I blame her, lol. Next chapter is Virginia: The Beartrap!

I could just hear the cheesy dramatic fanfare being played in the background at the very end... 😳

DUNT dun Duhhhh!!!!

roflmao. This is getting complicated! 5/5

ST, lol, if only i could add sound effects to stories! I'd add a lot of rimshots for all my jokes 🤣

This is a really pivotal chapter though, because Brent hits this wall. I can feel his guts twist when he meets eyes with Olivia. Brent and Ginny have been chasing each other and having fun, but now real conflict begins!

There has to be a way to upstage Olivia, but I can't see how right now. What sticks out like a sore thumb is that 1) she lies about finding rat hair in a coffee she got there, then 2) says she has active litigation against the place. This is some kind of failure on someone's part to call her on this, and I would almost think Quinn or someone would check it out, as if Olivia HAD started proceedings against them, it would be on the public record of the county in question and that would be very easy to check. But you threw us 2 curve balls: Olivia showing up there randomly and 2) her giving Brent & Colin a chance to work at that party for $500.

You upped the ante, but someone has to call Olivia's bluff, because she's standing on one pair when someone else is holding a full house. 5

Ginny has to grow up, and do it fast. She has two possible futures: to yield to the pressure of her overbearing parents and aunt and become a doctile lamb to be married to a jerk, or stand on her own feet and show them the three-finger-salute. The whole thing with public sex in front of a group of matriarchs is humiliating for both and oressing Ginny. She will have to decide. Maybe she has an alley in her grandmother, but her parents and her disgusting aunt are definitely her enemys.

Plot twists :-) great job love it

Really awesome story! Thank you, Vanilla. It's going to be interesting to see how this all unfolds. I look forward to reading a chapter or two every night. I'm savoring it. 😊👍

And the plot thickens! Ginny is not caught between a rock and a hard place, she's tied to a stake, at the center of a track, with two screaming trains barreling towards each other. One being her insensitive, overbearing family, the other being the threat of her family blowing itself apart, with her holding the detonator. All the while, she is praying Beau(Brent) will come to her rescue. Nice twist on Romeo and Juliet. Families not feuding, but from different caste societies. Incredible work! 5⭐ Rafe

I've changed my mind. Hollywood shouldn't make a movie out of this, you sadistic bastard.

<insert long scream covering several ranges of actual voices here>

Just when it looks like things can't get anymore complicated (i.e. worse) you, gentle author, insert a "Holy Shit!" scene as a cliffhanger. Well done. 5/5*