All Comments on 'The Virgin Ceremonies Ch. 20'

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JohnAmalfi4104JohnAmalfi4104almost 2 years ago

Another excellent and entertaining chapter. Ginny is weak, but this is probably he most realistic outcome here, especially for an 18 year old girl who has been ground to peameal by her overbearing mother and neglectful father. Diana is compellingly awful, and very realistically drawn. You've done a great job with her. The only proper fate for her, of course, is one in the back of the neck in the basement of the Lubyanka, but not all stories can have a happy ending!

Awesome series, five stars of course.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Ginny isn't worth it.

OzeminotaurOzeminotauralmost 2 years ago

Diana is a bitch and the sooner Ginny learns that the better off she’ll be and what was in the packet that Nana gave Ginny

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Brent deserves a HEA epilogue 6 years later.

VanillaExtractVanillaExtractalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Hi, John. Thank you for your kind words! Karma would have a field-day with Olivia and Diane, it's true.

Hi Anon, Ginny's a complex person and very much a victim of her upbringing. Brent on the other hand is 18 and in love. I think he'd go to the ends of the earth for her. You and I, we're world weary. We won't go to the corner drugstore without asking "What's in it for me?" =P

Hey Oz, Packet, what packet? Ohhh, that packet? It's probably not important.

Hey other Anon. Haha, Just Brent, all alone, six years later!? That would be an awful ending...

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Next chapter 21 Virginia: Six Years Later

ScottishTexanScottishTexanalmost 2 years ago

I can see Nana's strategy. She was backhandedly trying to encourage Virginia to get a backbone without obviously or directly interfering with Diana's authority. I wonder when Ginny is going to get curious enough to look deeper into this green envelope that Nana told her to hang on to. My guess is that it's a document outlining the details of a trust fund that Ginny could draw from and tell Diana to go fuck herself.

WoodencavWoodencavalmost 2 years ago

This is a great storey, I love it. I so hope there is many more chapters. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Ginny still can't stand up to her mother. She may never be able to. I bet before the six years is up, Diana finds some sort of reason to deny her daughter yet again. Brent should cut his losses and not look back. He fights for her, but she is unwilling to do the same for him. Still a good story. 5⭐

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