All Comments on 'The Virgin Elf-Maid'

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russeltrustrusseltrustabout 2 years ago

gripped me from the first line, held me to the very last one, then I went back and read some of my favorite parts over again! 5/5, outstanding!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

very sexy, very smart

freebase2020freebase2020almost 2 years ago

a gem of a story, hidden away here :)

kentonbrownkentonbrownalmost 2 years ago

Kit was made for it! Lucky her mother found that dwarf for her. Bet in the next chapter, we find out her mother intended her daughter to share her lover all along.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Slow beginning setting up the world and the people then it pays off. Nice work.

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