All Comments on 'The Virgin Voyeur: Act 03'

by JupiterMars

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Hope you continue

College will be a perfect setting.

madtowncunilinguistmadtowncunilinguistover 3 years ago

This is an awesome story! I love how the characters develop through the series, and how Reagan opens up to her desires and fantasies. Also really like the sweet innocence of Cole and how he develops into being a warm tender lover, and how he is gobsmacked by her sensuality. Thank you for the time and effort you put into this. I think there might be one grammatical mistake, I think I remember seeing the word shutter when you meant shudder, but overall the editing was good enough to support a great story line.

Cheers!

Madtowncunilinguist

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I am a hobbyist writer slowly working my way through all of the story categories. I am trying different genres, different settings and different time periods. Constructive feedback always welcome.