by Lost_Kween
An almost perfect continuation. Some small grammatical errors that in no way detracted from this reader's enjoyment of the tale, I am so enjoying the slow build up and it is fully deserving of five stars.
My only complaint is that the story stops just as I’m really getting into it! Very much enjoying this!
Nice premise continues.
Still nice and slow.
Still very preliminary.
Nice build up continues.
Five stars.