All Comments on 'The Virtue Auction Ch. 05'

It seems as of each chapter is getting worse than the previous ones.

Love the last paragraph.

Delicious, this is a storyline that just keeps on giving. The arousal factor is off the scale and the characters feel so real. I am still tingling from that chapter. Thank you.

Fantastic writing, the imagery is really vivid and completely immerses you into the scene. Keep up the great work!

Gets better as it goes along!

Really sad I only have one left go read… for now

Justplainjeff,

You're just plain obnoxious. Your stories don't come close to the erotic deliciousness of this story. You're justplainjealous that you can''t write this well to satisfy women. It makes me wonder if that's true in real life as well.

Good premise continues.

Real sex starts. But barely.

Chapters a bit too short. Would prefer them not ending so quickly, and scenes not being so short.

Five stars.

As a female in enjoying the tease... maybe Jeff needs another category of stories