by Lost_Kween
Thank you for this installment! I look forward to the next one when your obligations allow. The wait will just make the reward sweeter!
This was a great chapter! Looking forward to the next when you have time and good luck with your projects!
There are no problem with your writing speed. More slow release and good story, than fast and crappy.
I agree with the comments posted, take you time and write a good story, take care of life as well though. I look forward to the story continuing
I love your soft pornographic write style. I wish you a lot of free time to work.
You write true erotica vs smut. It’s sexy, arousing but almost lyrical in rhythm. Your characters show respect for each other, even if one is a spoiled rich bitch. She’s kind of a nice spoiled rich bitch. You also show respect for bodies and body parts in vocabulary and description. No obscenely disproportionate “38 DDD knockers” rather gentle delicate curves of soft breasts. Much more appealing, believable and sexy.
REALLY enjoyed reading it!! Can't wait to read the next part or other stories you write!
Can’t wait for the next chapter. Really enjoyed reading it so far. Gutted to have to wait. Hope you are okay and look after yourself x
This definitely is a beautiful story, it's almost unbelievable that things like this could exist outside the norm, but if is then that's okay with me because I believe lesbians do have the most intriguing life together than any other relationship when it comes to companionship and sex. We do need to read up on the final ending of this lovely intriguing story.
Lovely story.
One note though. Rose had promised Sophia to address the fact that Sophia's parents expected her home after the first night and the narrative does not indicate that this has been followed up.