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by awin9696

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Question ?

Is english your your normal form of speach ?????? Sorry it does not seem to be.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great

Really hot! Great job! Improve writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I liked the man's point of view better. The editing needs some help, but if I was writing stories like this I wouldn't want to go back and edit. It's better to let the flow gush. ;)

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