All Comments on 'The Visitors'

I really enjoyed it. I'd say you met your goal! How about a part 2?

Very interesting read. Loved how it wasn't complete mind control but a push of a thought.

I'd give it 5 stars had you included the alien shooting it's 'fake' load in all her holes.

Are you plan on making a sequel?

That was great... but I think I hurt my back...

I really love tentacle stories and this was a great one.

Lovely

" Lattes disappeared from restaurant menus."

NOT OUR LATTES!!!! WE NEED TO FIGHT THEM TO THE DEATH!!!!

;-D

Seriously, I liked your story. I enjoy it more when the aliens are *somewhat* more comprehensible, but I think it was very well written - especially if it took 'only 7h53m.

I also liked your description as to how the aliens learned to fuck. (Paraphrasing here...) Fuck all her holes and then cum all over her face and body.

Priceless. Lots of internet porn is *exactly* like that, LOL.

I'd also love to have a continuation of this story... maybe more about the aliens' motivations? *shrug*