All Comments on 'The Waitress'

I thought this was a good short story, hope there is more to come

Nice to read but what confused me is that the centre character, in the midst of their first love-making with Allison, seems to be reminiscing about earlier bed adventures. "The reason I adored Ally so much was because she had learned every crevice of my body and how different my reactions were depending on what she did." - an example.