All Comments on 'The Ward Ch. 02'

I cant wait for more.

I really enjoyed reading this story I have been back everyday for weeks looking for part 3. I can't wait to read it I hope that it's soon.

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More Please.

I like the start of this story.So many places / ways it could go .

Please can I have another chapter ?

Weren’t all of those lovely staff members hired for their sadistic tendencies? Why are they being nice?

As for how they got there I see where you’re going, lifestyles of the rich and whatever they were duped into signing something that they thought was a retreat akin to private spa but on arriving/ waking up are shown that they have questionable mental health.

Honestly there isn’t a need for this kind of duplicity, I expect there’s enough of a market for sub training from those who are willing. What you have instead is thinly veiled Human Trafficking and I can’t find anything about that sexy at all.

Still it’s your kink, so good luck, hope you have fun with it. Please don’t let my opinion put you off writing. I’m out though.