All Comments on 'The Washed Up Artist'

by Biggalute

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Trying to hit the 750 word limit left too much unsaid that the story alludes to…

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Trying to hit the 750 word limit left too much unsaid that the story alludes to…

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunover 2 years ago

Beautifully executed, especially in so few words.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Too much left unsaid.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Vignette to take away… once wrapping a pastrami sandwich in a dark and cold writer’s one bedroom flat… now laying at the roadside in the backyard, blowed away through the wide open window

First raindrops start falling…

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SouthernCrossfireSouthernCrossfireabout 2 years ago

750 words strikes again, for better and worse this time, leaving the reader with the implication and a lingering question that won't soon be forgotten. Nicely done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Evocative but confusing, left me frustrated and angry

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyabout 2 years ago

Talking about the past coming back to kick you in the nuts!

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GuyfromShadesGuyfromShadesalmost 2 years ago

Interesting. Thanks for writing.

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