All Comments on 'The Watch'

Why, why, why do I have to wait?

I don't know if it was by design or glorious accident that the second page of this submission is that single, agonisingly tantalising line, but it is absolutely perfect either way. I love stories that have this build-up, that tease and tease until I can hardly take it, and you, you've done it.

This is one of the best stories I've read here. I'm watching, waiting.

I must say I enjoyed this tale tremendously. The subject matter, the timing, the pace was perfect and the absence of particular details I found enchanting, for I, as the reader, could fill in those to my own particular vision. Very well done, very well done indeed.

many many thanks for the kind words. this one was completely different to what i would normally write, but i enjoyed it so much. and the last, single line being on the final page was a glorious accident :D