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49WIZARD88 6 months ago

Can't wait for chapter 4

Anonymous4 months ago

and lets just add another guy to take it even further away from what the first chapter set the story up to be.

Nestic 4 months ago

Wonderful, exquisite storytelling. So beautifully "composed", so perfect.

There are not enough superlatives, to describe your story.

The splendid example of what an erotic story can be, as apposed to superficial porn stories.

Superb.

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I've always loved writing, from an early age - even from a time before typewriters when we used pen and paper. I like to develop strong and believable characters, and explore the nuances of erotica. I also like to add little 'twists' at the end of my stories. I have several st...

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