All Comments on 'The Wedding Planner - Ch. 01'

Excellent work. Short but sweet.

Outstanding!!! 5/5!!

Nothing better than a bride being ravished by her not-husband on her wedding night! Can't wait for the next chapter and for many many more!

This bride and groom were nameless so I suppose we won't see them again, looking forward to the next bride! and maybe some bridesmaids as well? Hope some are at least partially awake for their ravishment.

Leaving aside the whole issue of rape (why does Literotica condone, even encourage that?), the whole upscale atmosphere (Baccarat, etc) is pretty much ruined by the "vintage Bordeaux" in the wine chiller.

Could have used some anal rape as well.

Yes. He could take her anal cherry as well. And could have enjoyed her charms every day during their honeymoon. I would...

You could tell us more about his other conquests.

This plot is very inventive.

Congratulations.

Amazing. Thanks!

I really enjoyed this original story. I think he could of had a booming side business sharing the brides with other men as he previously done just for himself. Maybe a part 2?

Great work, looking forward to chapter 2.