All Comments on 'The Wedding Proposal Ch. 09'

You are killing me. I love this story, but your chapters are so short. Can't wait for the next installment.

Great story….so very beautiful!!

I wish I was the lucky bride!!

It always has been my dream!!!

When you finish the storyline, collect them all in one story with continuity fillers in between if needed will be a nice lil novella!

Loving nearly every time you write something new , as someone else has said that I wish you’d make each chapter a tad longer but, I’ll take what you share with us all xxx

Short chapters, and it seems like there’s no real character development. Tony doesn’t speak about his feelings, the protagonist doesn’t deal with the sex she had with the random alley guy. I want to like the story but I feel it needs more emotional development.