by YourWillingToy
I detected the foreshadowing re: Daphne. Hope that you were not just teasing......
The taunting he did regarding her sister was a massive turn off for me, it honestly made me feel nauseous. I almost quit reading but instead skipped past it as quickly as possible. I also noted the comment about her cousin in the adjacent room. It’s not my place to try and influence your story, but if you do decide to include anything incestuous a trigger warning would be greatly appreciated. That way myself and others with the same aversion can just ignore that chapter(s). It’s not a kink that I understand or want to understand.
Tess (uk)
......if there's going to be hints of incest it would be nice to be warned about that. Huge turn off that ruined the whole thing.