All Comments on 'The Weekend at Grandma'

Good work, normally I read the longer stories or the series, you certainly have potential.

i cant rate this story. The stars do not go into a negative category. Reason for not rating it is this. It appears to look like a child wrote it. Like a 5 year old. Sentences are all sloppy.

If you write again. Please write it like an adult wrote it.

English 101 would be a good start for you.

Don’t quit you day job.

give it up this is crap

I read the first three paragraphs and just had to stop it was so bad. This is the first comment I've ever posted in all the years reading Literotica stories.. I just had to say something.

Really?

WTF

And I thought my work was supposed to the worst crap going.

I made it to the second paragraph but I can't say any of it sunk in.

that was literally the worst piece of shit ive read in my life LMAO. turn off fr

Very average. A

Fucking horrendous. Give up writing, immediately.

idiotic, amateur, just plain ridiculous.