All Comments on 'The Weekend Ch. 07 - Louise's Story'

I won't comment on the plethora of mistakes. English isn't my mother tongue either, I don't claim I could do it any better.

Storywise: It's painfully obvious that this is the fantasy of a rather masochistic sub that went wild.

It may resonate with others, most probably masochistic subs. It sure as heck didn't resonate with me. More then once I got angry about the attitude of the depicted dominants who very often acted careless and reckless.

All in all... meh. Solid enough to don't fall through completly, but there are better stories with the same kinks on this site.

Not a bad Fantasy. And now know why there were so many mistakes, with the story going though the Translation too. But this poor husband need to just pack his things up and hit the road that very minute. The slut just called him her slave, after telling him he has a small cock, she wants more big cock and she loves Lesbian sex too. So what is there to stay for? And we know she'll be locking your small cock up to keep cuckolding you too. Besides all of that she was happy Watching useless suffer most of the time you were there, and never even said she was sorry for your Suffrage. Fuck this slut, just leave her, this is not love. He got more love from Pet then his own wife..

WTF this story should have come to a stop as soon the husband was locked in the dog cage in the bedroom and master started raping his wife, not once be several times! Why didn't the husband yell out his safe word !! All though out the story the husband only got one fucking Pity fuck and one BJ. While his wife that set up this whole thing in Secret, got fuck over and over, even just raped a couple time. Husband had no reason to Continue playing these Depraved fuck games, as he really got nothing Pleasurable of it !!

After all she told her so called husband. If I were her husband. After she said "more wine slave" I would use the safe word, gather up all of my stuff and leave. Poor cockhold total submissive. Doms and subs should trade places periodically even in a fantasy story. That is so neither has complete control of the other.