by RURDY4BGJOE
No thanks. Too short, not descriptive enough, nothing unique to keep me interested but others enjoy the story so good luck.
Great wee short story... you've even set up some obvious follow-ups, so go for it!
Interesting plot and characters. Simple straightforward dialogue with direct hands and mouth-on approach. It might work. Well written.
Am sure Becky and Paul could have lots of fun with the local residents both male and female.
Love that there was no cheating on the part of these three.
But using my world i was shocked that a newly divorced man in early 20’s can afford a luxury condo.
I'm ready to move to these condos! Yes, please tell us more about the welcoming association. Are there others also involved? Sounds like these two found an answer to all their problems.
This story is lots of fun! Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.
Hopefully this becomes a multi-part story and if it does you could introduce Lucy and make her a 60+ gilf who could show Steve all of the various massage oils she has.