All Comments on 'The Welcome Association'

by RURDY4BGJOE

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DunkirkDunkirkabout 1 year ago

Steve should have fun taking advantage of visits from Becky and Paula.

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowabout 1 year ago

Great concept - love this.

hankmbb1017hankmbb1017about 1 year ago

More, more and oh yeah, more!

AhaskinAhaskinabout 1 year ago

More of this story would be great.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Liked it....please continue on with that plot

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

No thanks. Too short, not descriptive enough, nothing unique to keep me interested but others enjoy the story so good luck.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

of course it should continue

DooDeePlanBDooDeePlanBabout 1 year ago

Great wee short story... you've even set up some obvious follow-ups, so go for it!

mitchawamitchawaabout 1 year ago

Interesting plot and characters. Simple straightforward dialogue with direct hands and mouth-on approach. It might work. Well written.

dommasterjimdommasterjimabout 1 year ago

More good stuff in Outbasket... Lets read some more..!!

fafhrd09fafhrd09about 1 year ago

Short and sweet. Please write more of them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Definitely more please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I laughed out loud! Please expand on this welcome wagon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Amazing waiting for more of it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Story was short, well written, and fun.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Am sure Becky and Paul could have lots of fun with the local residents both male and female.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Love that there was no cheating on the part of these three.

But using my world i was shocked that a newly divorced man in early 20’s can afford a luxury condo.

Vafunman42Vafunman42about 1 year ago

Great story, like to read more about Paula, Becky, and Steve.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great start Keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I'm ready to move to these condos! Yes, please tell us more about the welcoming association. Are there others also involved? Sounds like these two found an answer to all their problems.

Davester37Davester37about 1 year ago

This story is lots of fun! Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Hopefully this becomes a multi-part story and if it does you could introduce Lucy and make her a 60+ gilf who could show Steve all of the various massage oils she has.

DrizdartDrizdartabout 1 year ago

Sure, tell us more.

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Highly educated nerd looking to write engaging stories. Submitted the latest Carol story - Aunt Carol. Working on the Final - Carol's Kids.

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