All Comments on 'The Wheel and The Wand'

Very hot. The story of how got there might be worth doing.

Perfection

Good story!

5

@Rob_Royale - yes, it could be expanded 😊 Em

so fucking descriptive

@Dark_Logan_ very kind of you to say 😊 Em

@Boyd Percy - thank you 😊 Em

@lc69hunter - thank you 😊 Em

You paint such vivid images with your words. And to tell an erotic story without the usual trope words takes skill. Well done.

@Djmac1031 - thanks, hun 😊 Emily

Very hot Emily. You definitely have a way with words and imagination !! Great job !!

@Anon - thank you, I appreciate the feedback 😊 Emily

Wow, you can actually feel the tension and what the main protagonist was going through. Did this make the 750 Word Project 2024?

@CupidCupid - thank you - I tried to capture what goes through your mind in situations like this 😊 Emily

Marvelously intense!

xSailor

@Anon - that’s what I was trying to capture, thank you 😊 Emily

Great short story. I love the way you describe everything and take us to a place where we can imagine this actually happening to us !!

@Anon - thank you so much, very encouraging feedback 😊 Emily