All Comments on 'The Whoremaker'

Consider me intrigued. A heads up this is part 1 would be nice

I wish i had this power!

More please

Great first entry on a series. Looking forward to the next.

This story shows a lot of promise, but please get an editor. There are volunteer editors on the site who will help you for free. Your ideas are good and the premise is interesting but the poor grammar and writing are very distracting.

Interested in where you go with this, please continue

Please continue!

Superb start.

The plot is interesting so you have a writers imagination but you need someone to fix your grammar, spelling etc. It's hard to enjoy a story when confronted by such obvious deficiencies.

OMG sorry for some of the Spelling errors, any volunteer editors?

Hi, um this is so awesome. I didn't think I'd get so many positive reviews. I'm searching for an editor, for help with future entries.