All Comments on 'The Wicked Tower Pt. 24'

"I love sand. It's coarse, gets everywhere, and agitates the weak."

lol

I loved this story from beginning to end!

Another great story with still so much potential. Thanks for writing, it was very hot and entertaining. I'm enjoying all of your work. Do you have other works out there that you don't post here? Thanks again for writing it's much appreciated 😊👍

Enjoyed it

Great story. If I would change one thing, it would be that we see more signs of affection and romance between Dellia and the siblings (kissing, use of his title) the way we do with Vel and Naevia. We see Dellia tell her husband that she has bedded them each, and fuck them, but there is so much sex that it doesn’t seem Dellia is more than a fuck buddy-though I think she is meant to be. If you do a follow up, showing more of the relationship would be welcome.

Great. Just,...great.

I enjoyed the story. I read all the chapters over the last few days.

Tbh I was initially a little miffed that you had maybe gone a little wild with the thesaurus. Then amused. There were occasional use of obscure and rarely used English. Some of which were:

Declivity.

Approbation

Somnolence

Bellicose

Defenestrated.

In using less common words do you aim to show off, are you trying to confuse the readers who may not have English as a first language. Communicating is about getting the relevant story to the reader. If ever a reader has to re-read a paragraph to try to understand what was written then the writing could be lmproved.

Having said all that it was a great story which I could never write so well myself. Thanks.