All Comments on 'The Wicked Witch Pt. 02'

I really loved your story progression, tho it was kinda short but I really loved how the way you introduced things. This mystery vibe to it is also good, like the guy doesn't remember about the past. Also the big girl, she was both cruel and soft at the same time, kinda makes it a good romance. I definitely can't wait for the next part!!!

Bad torture porn. Badly wrotten, ridiculous characters, awful progression, this rag has no positive points

It is pretty good but their are some points that could ve imrpoved upon like the progression of the dtory and punctuation but otger than trivial things like that its Pretty damn good

Great story. But, where's the next?

you're doing pretty darn well for a first multi-page story!

Keep up the good work!

Its super hot, and I'm excited to see what happens

I cant seem to sign in anymore. I keep getting a session data server error when signing in or trying to upload. IDK why or how to fix this so ill be uploading to hentaifoundry under the same name for a while and Ill post my more non policy complying works there.

I hope you'll continue the story :)

I hope you'll continue the story, this is good