by Johnand567
Good grief dude. Use some fucking punctuation.
Peeing all over the place sounds like great fun, nope, changed my mind.
Terrible. I hesitate to even call this writing.
Some capitals would have helped...
Just reading the title I knew this was a first story. That's how pathetic it's become.
You fucked up sick freak. Take your fetish stories somewhere else
Kick the bitch out for ruining her pussy.
get a fucking proof reader
no cages, no chastity
Absolute bollocks.
Couldnt read any more than first 2 paragraphs for laughing