All Comments on 'The Wilderness Canoe Guide'

Great story

I love your imagination. The story was fresh and so enjoyable. I would love to see you revise this sometime. The characters could do with more depth. Flesh out the individuals some more. Thanks for the epilogue. I wish more writers would do this on stand alone stories. Zac and company are nice guys. They would make a nice series.

i loved the way you took us on the canoe trip too ...the way you described the scenery was cool without being 'too much'. I thought it was a great story. You should do Todd and Damien's story

YES THAT IS A REAL GREAT STORY PITY IT WAS CONCLUDED IN 5 SHORT CHAPTERS.? THAT COULD HAVE BEEN A FULL THIRTY CHAPTERS.? ALSO CANT YOU FOLLOW IT UP WITH THE KIDS GOING AT IT TOO.? BIG J

Absolutely a beautiful story and I could have fallen for any one of the four gorgeous guys.

Loved every word of this story. There just could not have been any other way for this story to end. Thank you so so much!!!

Amazing!