All Comments on 'The Wilderness Canoe Guide'

by Snowblind94

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Greatness!!

Loved every word of this story. There just could not have been any other way for this story to end. Thank you so so much!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Loved it

Absolutely a beautiful story and I could have fallen for any one of the four gorgeous guys.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

YES THAT IS A REAL GREAT STORY PITY IT WAS CONCLUDED IN 5 SHORT CHAPTERS.? THAT COULD HAVE BEEN A FULL THIRTY CHAPTERS.? ALSO CANT YOU FOLLOW IT UP WITH THE KIDS GOING AT IT TOO.? BIG J

canndcanndabout 9 years ago
Really sweet story ...

i loved the way you took us on the canoe trip too ...the way you described the scenery was cool without being 'too much'. I thought it was a great story. You should do Todd and Damien's story

chesthairslavechesthairslaveabout 9 years ago
Yes, please!

I love your imagination. The story was fresh and so enjoyable. I would love to see you revise this sometime. The characters could do with more depth. Flesh out the individuals some more. Thanks for the epilogue. I wish more writers would do this on stand alone stories. Zac and company are nice guys. They would make a nice series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Great story

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