All Comments on 'The Wilson Files'

by rwsteward

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
More FIles

Well done and 5 stars all around for content, style and pacing. THERE JUST HAS TO BE MORE FILES THAT NEED REVIEWING. THANKS.

pa47epa47ealmost 13 years ago
excellent

Well crafted............. well thought out, good solid writing........

hw_germanyhw_germanyalmost 13 years ago
An excellent story

I am waiting anxious for your next story with Mrs. Hudson and hopefully some more.

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
great story

Really great story from start to finish,

amsterdamamsterdamover 11 years ago
Great writing

Top marks for the detail, teasing build-up, inventive metaphors and generally brilliant writing. There are some silly spelling mistakes, missing words etc. In there though. Probably worth 'employing' an editor to eradicate these in future stories (I know some people automatically score lower for this). Personally, I would have also left out the detail of the hidden wife from the story synopsis as this would have added an unexpected twist (just something I like in stories). Look forward to reading more of your work. Thanks for the top read and 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More please

So hot so sexy please give us chapter 2 and 2

SyrazSyrazover 7 years ago

Very well written, very erotic story! Thanks!

BarlowNBarlowNover 6 years ago
Very hot

This is a great story. I can't wait for the follow-up story

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Homesweethome99Homesweethome99almost 4 years ago
Loved the story

Can we have part two where the wife gets involved ?

PartlyPartlyover 1 year ago

Very, very enjoyable

Helen1899Helen1899over 1 year ago

Very different than most stories, but hot, I was has wet has Lily, I want a follow up please

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