All Comments on 'The Wiltshire Hotel'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nicely done. Just the proper amount of hinted incest although hard to tell considering we are talking corpses and ghosts but your quantity and quality of warped reality made this story brilliant.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

What was that "apple and pears van dyke" wording for the English guy. If your going to spend time placing a story in another country you dont know at least do a second of research. It not like he is speaking some unknown hidden language.

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Former military, semi-serious writer. Published a few stories on Amazon as Twisted Dave. I tend to write non-consent/reluctance, took a trip into a romance story, dabble in incest stories and willing to try other genres. I use my writing as a way to cope with everyday stress. ...